Aufgabe HT 1 - Aufgabe 3.2 · Abitur NRW Englisch LK · Haupttermin 2023
Thema: Kreatives Schreiben: Perspektivwechsel und Fortsetzung (Re-creation of text) · Aus der Prüfung LK · Haupttermin (2023)
Aufgabenstellung
Klausurteil A
Imbolo Mbue
How Beautiful We Were
The following passage opens the novel. Thula tells the story, which takes place in the 1980s in Kosawa, a fictional African village.
We should have known the end was near. How could we not have known? When the sky
began to pour acid and rivers began to turn green, we should have known our land would
soon be dead. Then again, how could we have known when they didn’t want us to know?
When we began to wobble and stagger, tumbling and snapping like feeble little branches,
5 they told us it would soon be over, that we would all be well in no time. They asked us to
come to village meetings, to talk about it. They told us we had to trust them.
We should have spat in their faces, heaped upon them names most befitting – liars,
savages, unscrupulous, evil. We should have cursed their mothers and their grandmothers,
flung pejoratives upon their fathers, prayed for unspeakable calamities to befall their
10 children. We hated them and we hated their meetings, but we attended all of them. Every
eight weeks we went to the village square to listen to them. We were dying. We were
helpless. We were afraid. Those meetings were our only chance at salvation.
[...]
In the square we sat in near silence as the sun left us for the day, oblivious to how the
beauty of its descent heightened our anguish. We watched as the Pexton men placed their
15 briefcases on the table our village head, Woja Beki, had set for them. There were always
three of them – we called them the Round One (his face was as round as a ball we would
have had fun kicking), the Sick One (his suits were oversized, giving him the look of a man
dying of a flesh-stealing disease), and the Leader (he did the talking, the other two did the
nodding). We mumbled among ourselves as they opened their briefcases and passed sheets
20 of paper among themselves, covering their mouths as they whispered into each other’s ears
to ensure they had their lies straight. We had nowhere more important to be so we waited,
desperate for good news. We whispered at intervals, wondering what they were thinking
whenever they paused to look at us [...].
We inhaled, waited, exhaled. We remembered those who had died from diseases with
25 neither names nor cures – our siblings and cousins and friends who had perished from the
poison in the water and the poison in the air and the poisoned food growing from the land
that lost its purity the day Pexton came drilling. We hoped the men would look into our eyes
and feel something for us. We were children, like their children, and we wanted them to
recognize that. If they did, it wasn’t apparent in their countenance. They’d come for Pexton,
30 to keep its conscience clean; they hadn’t come for us.
Woja Beki walked up to the front and thanked everyone for coming.
“My dear people,” he said, exposing the teeth no one wanted to see, “if we don’t ask for
what we want, we’ll never get it. If we don’t expunge what’s in our bellies, are we not
going to suffer from constipation and die?”
35 We did not respond; we cared nothing for what he had to say. We knew he was one of
them. We’d known for years that though he was our leader, descended from the same
ancestors as us, we no longer meant anything to him. Pexton had bought his cooperation
and he had, in turn, sold our future to them. [...]
In the glow of the fading sun our village looked almost beautiful, our faces almost free
40 of anguish. Our grandfathers and grandmothers appeared serene, but we knew they weren’t
– they’d seen much, and yet they’d never seen anything like this.
“We’ll now hear from Mr. Honorable Representative of Pexton, all the way from Bézam
to speak to us again,” Woja Beki said, before returning to his seat.
The Leader rose up, walked toward us, and stood in the center of the square.
45 For several seconds, he stared at us, his head angled, his smile so strenuously earnest we
wondered if he was admiring a radiance we’d never been told we had. We waited for him to
say something that would make us burst into song and dance. We wanted him to tell us that
Pexton had decided to leave and take the diseases with them.
His smile broadened, narrowed, landed on our faces, scanning our stillness. Seemingly
50 satisfied, he began speaking. He was happy to be back in Kosawa on this fine day, he said.
What a lovely evening it was, with the half-moon in the distance, such a perfect breeze, was
that the sound of sparrows singing in one accord? What a gorgeous village. He wanted to thank
us for coming. It was great to see everyone again. Incredible how many precious children
Kosawa has. We had to believe him that the people at headquarters were sad about what was
55 happening to us. They were all working hard to resolve this issue so everyone could be
healthy and happy again. He spoke slowly, his smile constant, as if he was about to deliver
the good news we so yearned for.
We barely blinked as we watched him, listening to lies we’d heard before. Lies about how
the people who controlled Pexton cared about us. Lies about how the big men in the
60 government of His Excellency cared about us. Lies about how hundreds of people in the
capital had asked him to relay their condolences to us. “They mourn with you at the news of
every death,” he said. “It’ll be over soon. It’s time your suffering ended, isn’t it?”
Annotations:
9 to fling pejoratives – here: to speak in a very negative way about someone
42 Bézam – fictional African town
Klausurteil A: Leseverstehen und Schreiben integriert
3.2
Thula, the narrator, has dedicated her life to opposing oil drilling in Nigeria and has received an international award for her remarkable contribution to sustainable development there. As a result, she has been asked to contribute an article to The Guardian explaining how her childhood in Kosawa inspired her to become an environmental activist and what she demands for the future. Write the article. (Evaluation: re-creation of text) [14 Punkte]

Lösung
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3.2 Thula, the narrator, has dedicated her life to opposing oil drilling in Nigeria and has received an international award for her remarkable contribution to sustainable development there. As a result, she has been asked to contribute an article to The Guardian explaining how her childhood in Kosawa inspired her to become an environmental activist and what she demands for the future. Write the article. (Evaluation: re-creation of text) [14 Punkte]
Lösung: A newspaper article written from Thula's perspective for *The Guardian*, containing: 1. Format and Stance: - Catchy headline, engaging introductory hook reflecting on the international award. - Consistent adoption of Thula's authentic voice, balancing personal pain with determined activism. 2. Personal Motivation (Childhood in Kosawa): - Destruction of the village ecosystem (acid rain, toxic water, ruined farmland). - Loss of siblings, cousins, and friends to nameless, preventable illnesses. - Betrayal by corrupt village leadership aligned with corporate greed. - The humiliation of enduring empty corporate promises and fake empathy from Pexton representatives. 3. Demands for the Future of Nigeria: - Immediate transition away from reckless fossil fuel extraction towards clean, sustainable energy. - Comprehensive ecological restoration of damaged regions like the Niger Delta. - Enforcing corporate accountability and penalizing environmental crimes. - Investing in local communities through education, healthcare, and sustainable infrastructure. 4. Conclusion: - Reaffirming the power of grassroots resistance and international solidarity. - A closing appeal urging global readers and political leaders not to look away.
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