Aufgabe HT 1 - 3.2 · Abitur NRW Englisch GK · Haupttermin (2) 2023
Thema: Kreatives Schreiben: Perspektivwechsel und Fortsetzung (Re-creation of text) · Aus der Prüfung GK · Haupttermin (2) (2023)
Aufgabenstellung
Klausurteil A
Rachel May
The Audit
The story takes place in North America at some point in the near future.
“Dad! You’ve got to come. We got the Audit.” The boy’s normally high voice took on a
husky rasp as he pronounced the last words.
“An audit? You make it sound like a fatal illness,” Bill responded to his anxiety-prone son
with a practiced calmness, as David grabbed his hand and started pulling him towards the
5 house. “Relax, Davey. It’s not that big a deal. Our taxes are all in order.” […]
As soon as they entered the house, Bill felt David’s hand tighten and his shoulders stiffen.
Bill’s wife Laurie was standing at the computer in the family room, biting her lip, while
their daughter Jess looked on with an inscrutable expression.
“C’mon, everybody. It’s just an audit, right?” Bill tried the soothing tone again. “What’s
10 the big deal? We’re as likely to get taxes back as to owe them.”
“It’s not a tax audit, honey. It’s the new one.” Laurie’s voice had a touch of the same husky
terror he had heard from David.
“Yeah, Dad. You know, the GCA?” Jess added, with the practiced superiority of a 14-year-old.
“GCA?”
15 David’s voice rose to a squeak. “I heard they take your house and car and everything!”
Laurie came over to give David a hug while Bill sat down, bewildered, at the computer.
“Now I’m sure it’s not that bad. Let me take a look.” He was embarrassed to admit he hadn’t
heard of the GCA, when even his fifth-grader seemed to know all about it.
Big yellow letters on a dark blue screen spelled out GLOBAL CLIMATE AUDIT. Every effort
20 to surf away from the page resulted in the same message: “You have been selected for the
GCA. Internet service will be restored after you complete your climate footprint calculation.”
“You have to do it, Dad. It’s international law.” Jess said. […]
It didn’t give Bill much confidence as he stared at the Climate Footprint Calculator on the
screen. It was essentially a detailed inventory of their daily habits. The GCA already had a
25 surprising wealth of information about them: the amount of gas they bought each week for
the SUV, how many BTUs it took to heat and cool their six-bedroom house, how much hot
water they used, even what percentage of strawberries they bought came from Chile. At one
point he called his credit card company to complain that this outfit had hacked into his records.
“No worries, sir. That’s the GCA. They have treaty rights to that information. It will not be
30 used for any purpose other than calculating your carbon overdraft.”
Overdraft. That sounded ominous. Bill finished the online questionnaire. Shortly after he hit
SEND, a graphic appeared showing three round pictures of Earth and an additional wedge
with most of the Americas. The caption read:
“Your carbon footprint is 3.4 times the acceptable global mean. If everyone generated
35 your level of greenhouse gases, 3.4 planet Earths would be required to accommodate the
emissions. The terms of the Global Climate Accord require that you reduce your
footprint as follows…”
They were giving the family a year to get the number down below three, and two more years
to get it to one, on penalty of severe fines. Bill had two weeks to present the GCA with a
40 plan. […]
Bill didn’t think he could blithely hit “ACCEPT” the way he did whenever iTunes updated
its terms of service. This GCA was deep in his credit card data and might have the power to
hold him to it. He called Laurie’s sister, who was a lawyer.
“Sorry, Bill. The GCA is the real deal. The US and every other nation on Earth signed an
45 agreement this year to enforce its terms. I can’t believe you hadn’t heard about it. World
leaders have been trying to pass a global climate policy framework for decades, but the best
the cowards could do was shift the burden from governments onto individuals. People all
around the world are getting audited, and credit card companies and utilities are obligated
to furnish quantitative information about their consumption patterns.”
50 “Tell me about it. It’s as if they had informers everywhere—our gas tank, our fridge, probably
my underwear drawer. So you’re saying I should accept the terms?”
“I don’t think you have a choice. There’s some fine print you can read at the website that
may give you a way around their requirements, but they tried to make this treaty have teeth.”
So Bill went ahead and nervously clicked the fateful button. It was a relief to see his browser
55 pop up as if nothing had happened. Except that in one corner there hovered a blue box with
yellow letters, which periodically flashed a message, saying “You have 14 days remaining
to complete your climate action plan.”
Annotations
26 BTU – British Thermal Unit, used as a unit of energy in the US and Canada
34 mean – here: average
41 blithely – without any worries
41 iTunes – free software program developed by Apple which acts as a media player
53 to have teeth ( informal) – to be powerful and effective
3.2 Once he has filled in the questionnaire, Bill goes out for a walk to think about where he stands. On his way he considers the audit and what it could mean for him and his family. Write his interior monologue.
(Evaluation: re-creation of text) [14 Punkte]

Lösung
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3.2 Once he has filled in the questionnaire, Bill goes out for a walk to think about where he stands. On his way he considers the audit and what it could mean for him and his family. Write his interior monologue.
Lösung: An effective interior monologue adopting Bill's perspective should include: 1. Format and voice of an interior monologue: - Consistently written in the first person ('I'), reflecting the stream of consciousness and immediate emotional reactions. - Authentically captures Bill's voice, shock, anxiety, and feelings of vulnerability. 2. Reflection on the audit procedure: - Contemplation of his prior ignorance and complacency compared to his children's awareness. - Shock at the deep invasion of privacy and comprehensive surveillance (credit cards, utilities tracking heating, SUVs, groceries). - Frustration at the coercive nature of the procedure, feeling trapped with no legal way out ('14 days remaining'). 3. Anticipated consequences for himself and his family: - Everyday restrictions and lifestyle sacrifices: giving up the SUV, downsizing or enduring less heating/cooling in their six-bedroom house, changing eating habits. - Looming conflicts within the family: disagreements over what to sacrifice, blaming each other, coping with David's anxiety. - Long-term consequences: threat of severe financial fines, drastic changes to their lifestyle, anxiety over what the future holds for his children in a closely monitored world.
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