Aufgabe HT 1 - Aufgabe 3.2 · Abitur NRW Englisch GK · Haupttermin · Weiterbildungskolleg 2021
Thema: Kreatives Schreiben: Perspektivwechsel und Fortsetzung (Re-creation of text) · Aus der Prüfung GK · Haupttermin · Weiterbildungskolleg (Kolleg) (2021)
Aufgabenstellung
Klausurteil A
Rob Hart
The Warehouse
The novel takes place in the United States in the not-too-distant future. The protagonist, Paxton, has just reached one of the recruitment centres of Cloud, a huge online retailer, which is housed in a former theatre. Two years earlier he had left his job as a prison guard and founded a small business of his own, but he was forced to shut it down because of Cloud’s aggressive market strategies. He is now about to start a computer-based application process.
The screen flared to life, large numbers at the center of the display.
Ten.
Then nine.
Then eight.
5 When it hit zero, the tablet buzzed and flashed, and the numbers were replaced by a series
of empty fields. Paxton balanced it on his lap and focused.
Name, contact information, brief work history. Shirt size?
Paxton’s hand hovered over Work History. He didn’t want to explain what he had done before
this, and the confluence of events that had brought him to a broken theater in a broken town.
10 Because to do that meant having to explain that Cloud had destroyed his life.
Anyway, what would he write?
Would they even know who he was?
If they didn’t, was that better or worse?
Paxton found he did, in fact, have more room for sadness, at the thought of applying for this
15 job with CEO in the work history field.
His stomach knotted and he settled on the prison. Fifteen years. A long enough time to
demonstrate loyalty. That’s what he would call it, if he were asked: loyalty. If someone wanted
to know about the gap, those two years between the prison and now, he’d deal with it.
After he filled in all the fields, the next screen appeared.
20 Have you ever stolen anything?
Underneath were two buttons. Green Yes and red No.
He rubbed his eyes, the brightness of the screen making them ache. […]
Paxton tried to give each question serious consideration, even if he wasn’t sure what it all
meant, though he figured there was some kind of algorithm – something that would reveal
25 to them the core of his personality through his opinion on astronomy.
He answered questions until he lost count. Then the screen went blank, and it stayed blank
long enough that he wondered if he had done something wrong. He looked around for help
but, finding none, looked back to the screen, where there was more text.
Thank you for your answers. Now we ask for a brief
30 statement. When you see the timer appear in the lower
left-hand corner, the recording will start, and you’ll have
one minute to explain why you want to work at Cloud.
Please note, you don’t need to speak for the entire
minute. A clear, simple, and direct explanation will
35 suffice. When you feel that you are finished, you may hit
the red dot at the bottom of the screen to end the
recording. You will not have the opportunity to rerecord.
Paxton’s face appeared reflected back to him, distorted by the tilt of the screen, his skin
washed to a sickly gray by the glow. A timer appeared in the bottom left-hand corner.
40 1:00
Then:
:59
“I didn’t realize I would have to give a speech,” Paxton said, giving his best this-is-a-joke
smile, which looked sharper than he intended. “I guess I would say that, uh, you know, it’s
45 tough to get a job in this day and age, and between that and looking for a new place to live I
figure it’s kinda perfect, right?”
:43
“I mean, I really do want to work here. I think, uh, it’s an incredible opportunity to learn
and grow. Like the commercial says, ‘Cloud is the solution to every need.’” He shook his
50 head. “I’m sorry, I’m not great at talking off the cuff.”
:22
Deep breath.
“But I’m a hard worker. I take pride in my work and I promise to give this my all.”
:09
55 Paxton pressed the red button and his face disappeared. The screen flashed to white. He
cursed himself for stumbling through that. Had he known this would be part of the
application he would have practiced.
Thank you. Please wait while the interview results are
tabulated. At the end of the process your screen will turn
60 either green or red. If red, we are sorry, either you
failed the drug test, or you did not meet the standards
expected at Cloud. You may exit the building and you must
wait one month before reapplying. If green, then please
stay and await further instructions.
65 The tablet turned black. Paxton raised his head and looked around, to see everyone else
raising their heads […].
Paxton balanced the tablet on his knees, not sure whether he wanted to see red or green.
Red meant leaving here and standing in the sun until another bus arrived, if there was even
one coming. It meant scratching through want ads for jobs that didn’t pay enough to survive,
70 and apartment listings for places that were either out of his price range or so decrepit as to
be unlivable. It meant finding himself back in that rotten pool of frustration and emotion
where he’d been treading for months, his nose barely above the waterline.
It almost seemed preferable to working for Cloud.
Annotation:
15 CEO (Chief Executive Officer) – the person with the highest rank in a company
3.2 As soon as Paxton's screen turns green, he takes the job and, along with the other new hires, watches an introductory video. In it, the following is said: “Here at Cloud, we believe in offering a safe, secure work environment where you can be the master of your own destiny. [...] At Cloud, we evaluate your skill set, and we place you in the position that's best suited for both of us.” Write an interior monologue in which you express Paxton's thoughts and feelings at this moment, drawing on what you know about him. (Evaluation: re-creation of text) [14 Punkte]

Lösung
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3.2 Write an interior monologue that reflects Paxton's thoughts and feelings at that moment. (Evaluation: re-creation of text)
Lösung: Interior monologue from Paxton's perspective: - Expresses immediate cynicism towards the slogan ("master of your own destiny"), realizing Cloud dictates everything through algorithms. - Reflects bitter irony: Cloud destroyed his independent business and now pretends to care about his potential. - Ambivalence between relief (guaranteed roof and food, no longer facing destitution) and profound humiliation / defeat for surrendering to the corporate giant. - Curiosity mixed with dread regarding which position he will be assigned. - Concluding thought: resolution to survive, keep his head down, or perhaps look for a way to fight back from within.
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